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Phonetics + Poetry Writing / Rhyme

Student 1

Dedicated to Patrick
Patrick comes from Jungle
He is lustful
He goes to Disco
And takes *‘small K’ a little
His friend called Micheal (Michael) takes more than double
But Patrick goes to Haven (Heaven) faster than Micheal (Michael).

˙ Spelling mistakes are highlighted.
˙ Corrections are in brackets ( ).
*’small K’is the letter for Ketamine used by the student

 

 

Student 2

I am Leo,
I am lustful,
I always go to Disco,
(To) know some girls,
And then take some girls in my follow (with other fellows),
After one (a) year ago (or so),
The girl find (found) me in the Disco,
she said (to) have (delivered) my baby,
she (is) called BoBo.
The baby (is) called Yumiko,
I think so cold, (But I don’t think so)
because she (is) not beautiful! or wonderful!


Teacher’s Comment:
Creative! 7/10

 

 

Student 3 Teacher’s comment(s)

(B) TV Report: Mind your English

  1. Date of viewing: 2nd April, 03
  2. Time duration: 30 mins
  3. Post-viewing feedback:
    Haaa……. It was very funny and so exciting. I like Lizzie’s family very much. Her family (is) so different with (from) my family. Her parents very care for (about)hers as same (like) my parents. Her parents (are) very very charming with and humor, but my parents very……very old fashioned. I want (to live in) have Lizzie’s family !
  4. Words: drugs, replace, massive, epic, gosh, hang, entire, replace; might, burden;
 v.good


There are different strengths in different families!

good

 

 

Student 4 Teacher’s comment(s)

TV Report                                 17/4/2002
Title: Lizzie McGuire

  1. Date of viewing: 16/4/2002
  2. Time duration: 30mins
  3. Part-viewing feedback:
    I thought that it is a very good English TV programme. My English teacher Miss Ip always told our class some interesting English TV programme, it made me interested in the programme.
    When I was watching this programme, it made me learnt more English so I think I’ll watch this programme if I have time.
  4. words learnt
    1. decent

Good

 

 

News + Journal

Student 5

Oh, sister!
Sister, Sister
You always play with Sister
You always pick the flower
Mother and you always have a fight
Sister, sister
You play in (at) home,
But I’m (feel I am) very alone
Father wants to give you surprise
You like eating rice,
But you don’t like cry and [ice…]
You close your eyes,
You will have surprise
You always see the sky,
And think it is your life
One day, we go (went out) to play,
But my sister was late
I was very afaid (afraid),
I have a lovely sister anyway.


Teacher’s rating & comment: 9/10
Excellent!
Very interesting!
Keep writing poems & you’ll make
[a difference to your life]

 

Oh, Brother!
Brother, Brother,
trouble-maker.
Fooling around,
shouting aloud.
Annoyed father,
angered mother.
Being scolded, he went
for a boat!
During the float, he
enjoyed the most!
Inside the home, sister
felt alone.
Father asked mother, Where
did he go?
Mother answered, I
don’t know!
Getting worried, mum
felt dizzy,
But father only got angry!
Till the night came,
Brother wasn’t home,
And said to his mum, Sorry
for going out alone!
I just want to have a
happy zone!
Sarah Chow
Tsuen Wan Government
Secondary School’

 

News + Journal

Student 6

 
Today is a day,
that I wouldn’t say.
If you ask me why,
I would rather tell a lie.

I woke up late and lost
my keys,
I broke a plate and hurt
my knees.
I reached my school and was
severely scold,
the teacher was cool and that
made me cold.

By Howard
                                                                Teacher’s comment: V.good

Today is on (in) May,
That I can’t play.
If you ask me why,
Maybe I will cry.

I woke up late and can’t catch a bus,
I (was) late for school and the teacher punished me,
I lost my money and my keys.
That’smeans I will be hungry and I can’t go home!

 

 

Student 7

TV Report

Date of viewing: 26-5-03
Time duration: about 1 hour
Post-viewing feedback:
This program is about animals. Today it’s showing about animals on trees. One of the animals in the program are (is) a kind of monkeys with white fur. They can jump very far. They can jump from a very tall tree to another tree as usual. It’s so entertaining and it’s a (the) reason that I like to watch this kind of TV programs.

Teacher’s rating & comment: 9/10
Excellent!
Keep it up!

 

 

News + Journal

Student 8

                                     25th May, 03

My Role modle (model) Journal
My father is a role model for me.
He is a stweet, strict, responsible father. And he has many many good puality (qualities). I admire him so much. His Mathematics is very good. He has been intelligent brain so he is an outstanding businessman.

He love (loves) me and I love he (him) too. If I have something weighting (weighing) on my mind, he will share it with me and he advises me what to do. I think he has died, and, it’s too bad.


Teacher’s C

Role model
My tutor is a role model for me. She is a nice, responsible person. And she has a good sense of humour. Her English is very good. She has been to many foreign countries so she can speak English fluently.
She treats me as her younger sister and I treat her as my bigger sister. So when I have something weighing on my mind, I share it with her and she advises me what to do. I think she is my best listener.
During our lessons, she tried her best in her teaching. When I have questions or problems in my studies, she explains things to me patiently. After she has finished reading a book, she always recommends it if the book is useful for me.
I really hope that I can be like her – very responsible and intelligent, when I grow up.
Cheung Ka–yin
Our Lady of the Rosary College